First off thank you for all your comments they were very VERY helpful.
I switched my title to Tricks of the Trade because it is an analysis on the organization and structure of the chosen essays and not a basis to capture readers. And I hope you don't mind but I used your word "communication" in place of imprisonment, because lets face it, that word made better sense ( and I just used "communication" nothing else :) ). I even changed my ending because I was disgusted with my extended metaphor by the time I reread it! (Although I left it in the introduction) So, I have judged that I give you leave to help me on my essays anytime!!
And yes there is quite a bit going on in my head.
Mom is right you should be a teacher--and not for the sickly teen agers who wouldn't know intelligence if it hit them square between the eyes. I could see you as a college professor publishing novels on the side.
Anyway. Thanks again!
4 comments:
Whit,
Ah! Plagiarizer!
Kidding, kidding. Feel free to take the words out of my mouth and put them to good use. I've got too many words as it is.
Thank you for the comment regarding teaching. Working with young people (god, doesn't that make me sound old) is always a privilege, and I greatly enjoy it. Helping you is extra special, because it turns out I like you and you're writing is quite good. Lacking those two pre-requisites, I am not nearly as liberal with advice.
Keep posting the papers. I'll try to make time to read them.
Till then...rock on.
Tyler
Tyler,you are a wonderful cousin and nephew...thanks for taking the time with Whitney and Reme....I love you.
Aunt Sue
Taking the time with Reme...? Geez, I'm jealous! Just kidding, I will make Ty read some of my stuff sometime :)Good job Whit, I love to read your essays (I almost wish you would keep taking English classes, but I understand your reluctance to double major...but I'm thinking about a triple major so why not? NO pressure) love you :)
Oh you kids..doubles and triple majors...geez you little smarty pants you!! Spoken like a true auntie hmm?
I personally love what is going on in your head! It's nice when you share it.
I love all three of you for being who you are and enjoying watching and sharing where you are going!
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