First draft!!! Help!! Due Monday.
By labor we can find food and water, but all of our labor will not find for us another hour.”
-Kenneth Patton
Life’s Frying Pan Creatures
I see the sadness of what used to be our lives. It is torn between today and tomorrow, the terrible mockery that it was, or could have been. Our histories lie broken unable to escape, their feeble attempts falling soundlessly on the floor to lie with them. Is today’s world depleted, sold to the highest bidder, our old simplistic life forgotten, unwanted, and hopelessly out of date? Has technology forced us to change or are we as helpless as our pasts? Richard Florida, Arlie Russell Hochschild, and Walker Percy are three distinguished authors who make outstanding outcomes in their essays when it comes to the love-hate relationship we all have with our changing world.
We see our world today as this perfectly round sphere, but in actuality it is like a battered piece of tin, crinkled from what havoc we have wreaked upon it. Our once prosperous earth has become our personal punching bag of commerce and war. What was once meaningful is now lost and only the fortunate still grasp the essence of what makes us whole. In her essay, “From the Frying Pan into the Fire,” Arlie Russell Hochschild beckons us to recognize that the hole we are digging—called expansion, growth—will eventually be our graves. This hole will be so deep the corporate ladder will not be tall enough to help free us from this hell. She states: “…it is true that capitalism is a cultural as well as an economic system and that the symbols and rituals of this cultural system compete with, however much they seem to serve, the symbols and rituals of community and family. This means that working long hours and spending a lot of money—instead of spending time together—increasingly become how we say ‘I love you’ at home” (217). What Hochschild is getting across here is that capitalism is now seen as the blueprints on how we should live our lives. This system is the inner gangrene that festers among our unknowing buyers and sellers of this world. I too have noticed that the way I spend time with family is usually out shopping, sacrificing my hard saved pennies to the capitalism gods above: the Market. This push from a society of where we once had peaceful moments, where advertisements were scarce, and good company was valued has now become a place we must designate a price tag.
It is pathetic and disheartening that we must throw the cold bucket of water upon our minds to shock us from slumber so that we may see our corrupt and superficial existence. America’s rags to riches theory can be dumped into the trash among with the rest of the rubbish we once held dear, and our new Stalin is here to enforce its ways from nine to five and every other hour in between, while our families are sent to console themselves at fast food restaurants. I have found that I am missing a sense of purpose in my life, because there must be more to this struggle with minimum wage and expected advancement with education. Walker Percy documents in his essay, “The Loss of the Creature,” that the extraction of knowledge from a lesson is not fully comprehended unless that student wishes to delve deeper into the meaning, the essence, of anything, everything. The shift of being put through the motions to the actual understanding and learning of a subject can truly be influential. And that is what is missing in today’s society. Where is this ‘shift?’ Percy elaborates: “…the person is not something one can study and provide for; he is something one struggles for. But unless he also struggles for himself, unless he knows that there is a struggle, he is going to be exactly what the planners think he is” (415). We cannot force feed ourselves, our families, into believing that the equation of time at work = money = love is completely and totally wrong. Easing into reality is less painful that the full jump that others may not be willing to make. The recognition that there is a struggle is the first step into over coming that jumpers fear. As Percy says “…the sightseer must be prepared to enter into a struggle to recover a sight from a museum” (414). We must be ready to enter a world we may be uncomfortable with, a world that is run by commerce, and we must recognize that commerce cannot and will not control our lives.
Whereas Walker Percy begs us to recognize the anxiety we put ourselves through, Richard Florida beckons us to see the brilliance of what has been created.
If Arlie Russell Hochschild deplores capitalism at the expense of family, and Percy calls for our attention to encapsulated knowledge, then
3 comments:
I don't think you need help Whitney..this is very good. It does give pause and thought to the crisis our world is in.
Hi Whitney,
I really enjoyed reading this! If you send me your email (mine is jallinson7@hotmail.com) I can copy and paste it in there and leave some more detailed comments. You have done a great job with taking the different authors views about the changes in our society. Just a few things could be changed -- remember your goal is to communicate your unique view as writer to your reader as smoothly as possible (this is always my biggest challenge when I am writing). Try reading it aloud, (if you haven't already) and then anything that is rough will stick out to you. Sometimes I have to erase a whole sentence to get back to what I meant to say! Very good, though, and I am not just saying that. I agree with your points and find this a topic very worthy of consideration. Maybe start the first paragraph with a word picture for the reader, something that preps them for the coming points in your paper. Like I said, I'd be glad to dig in but I think it is very good as is. If I see that you have emailed me, I will give you some more final suggestions. Thanks again for helping out so much with baby Gabe at the wedding! I know he really enjoyed your company.
Love,
Joanna
I like it whit. I always feel like I am auditing your english class when I read your essays. It does make me think which is the whole point of the essay. I like and agree with Hochschild an Percy. I am a fan of capitalism in that I am not a fan, really, of anything else. I do wish for more community, I do wish I could be closer to my family, but I also like the emphasis of the individual. I don't want to be a hermit, but I want the seperation and the recognition that I am not a drop in the ocean of the community but a person who has chosen to love other people. I worry about the environment too. I want to be able to enjoy this earth and feel closer to it than I do right now, living inside four concrete walls. I love you, thanks for posting this because these are important things to talk about.
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